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One person, two people

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She said that she wanted to live
somewhere where the stars
shone over head so bright;
that it blocked out the moon.
        <he said that dreams were made
        to be broken and that she should
        get her head out of the clouds
        because it isn't gonna happen>
She said that rules were meant
to be broken [but] not bent
and that sometimes you
just have to work for what
you want
        <he said that working and hoping
        were two different things, and
        dreamers should just
        wake up>
She said that the sun smells
like summer flowers and
the rain tastes like salty
tears and
she didn't want to see him
again.
        <he said that the sun doesn't shine
        and that he was sick and tired of
        how the stars shone over head
        at night; how he couldn't see
        his lady lune no more>
she said that she was
tired;
tired of explaining of
crying; of tears; of
wishes; of hopes;
of dreams
        <he said that he was wrong.>
she said that he's a
liar. and the sun don't
shine where the clouds
decide to appear; shadows
are much scarier than the
dark
        <and he said that the river runs
        its strongest when it disappears
        into the open ocean; where it
        loses its strength to its older
        sibling only to find more power
        than it ever dreamed>
she said that he's just
saying things.
        <and he said that sometimes
        you have to throw the rock
        to the bottom of the lake;
        destroy the calm; the quiet;
        before you realize just how
        powerful you really
        are.

and she believes that
one person can make
a difference.
        <and so does he.>
This just came to me, thinking about the stars. Sorry that its... Messy(? ) that's the word I think I want. Not sure. It's just a bit off.. Probably because its 1 AM and my thoughts are racing.

:heart:

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The reason why its put into the romance section is because.. I view 'romance' as a form of hope. And this, to me, has a lot to do with gaining and losing hope. I don't know, Sorry. lol
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Mephious's avatar
Baw, thats very nicely written. >w<

I lite it a lot and I think it's got a lot of meaning behind it. <: Even if it is just some random thing you squalled up at 1 am xD